Once upon a time, there was a young girl named Daisy who was 7 years old. She lived near a field in a log cabin. It was midnight and Daisy was having a dream about Texas. One cloudy and foggy boring day, there were one thousand mountains, grassy, mossy and high. Daisy wanted to go on top of the highest ones. She was too young and they were too dangerous for her. Going round them, she spotted a big train track with lots of trains.
A little while later, a long red and black steam train came all the way down to the train station. Daisy was standing right next to it. In the next five minutes, the train stopped near her. She had no idea what was going on so she stepped right into it. After that, the doors closed and the steam train zoomed right around the mountain, and for some reason when it got to the very top of the point, it stopped right there, took off the ground and flew into the sky.
There were no people on it at all. "Wow," she thought, "I must be dreaming." The steam train went higher and higher and HIGHER, then it was going forward. "I wonder why this train is flying. I can't see any people on and there's no coach driving it. HELP! HELP!" she shouted. "I'm stuck in here."
Daisy nearly cried because she was all alone with no one. She felt like the last girl on earth, weeping. In the dream, she saw a ghost with dark grey hair and wrinkles everywhere, floating towards her. "ARRGGHHH!" she screamed.
"Don't be scared, Daisy," whispered the ghost. "I won't hurt you."
"But ghosts don't exist," said Daisy in a rather scared and twitchy voice.
"Yes, they do, especially in Texas, my dear," the ghost said to poor Daisy, but she thought it was fooling her so it could try to kill her. Actually, the ghost was trying to fool her but it didn't want Daisy to know because it hated people who cried. Daisy knew what it was doing so she tried to get out of the train. She found a hammer on the floor and used it to smash a window. When she did that, she also found a parachute on her seat and used it to jump. At first, she screamed because she was falling with a shock in her body. But then, the parachute opened quite quickly.
It floated down over the clouds, through the mist and landed slowly on top of one of the highest mountains. "Gosh... that was scary," she said. "It felt like a dream to me. Phew," she told herself as she landed safely. While she was still dreaming which she didn't know she was, all the train tracks on the mountains disappeared. "What happened?" she thought. "All the train tracks have gone. I wish I knew what was going on." She felt a little worried about everything, then the mountains faded away. Then, in the next two seconds, a big party just appeared for some reason and all Daisy's friends were there.
"Daisy, hi, we're going over to the dancing area. Would you like to come dance with us?" one of them said.
"Well, sure," murmured Daisy and they all went to do some cool dance moves at the dance area. In ten seconds at the most, Daisy woke up and it was 9.30am. Her mother asked her to get dressed.
"Come on, Daisy," she said. "We need to catch the train if you want to go shopping to Tesco."
"I don't really like trains anymore," said Daisy, in a cute voice.
"But why, sweetheart?" asked her mum.
"Because I had a horrible dream about being trapped on a flying steam train, and a ghost showed up."
"It's okay, Daisy. It was just a dream, it wasn't real. Shall we go in the car instead?"
"Yes please, mum," replied Daisy. "I'd love that very much."
Her mum drove the car to the shops and Daisy wasn't scared any more.
The End.
14 comments:
That was a very lovely story, Amy. And I know this feeling too. I am dreaming and then THINK I wake up and even write my dream on paper so I won`t forget it, but when I REALLY wake up, I know this has also been part of the dream. So what is real? Who knows that? Maybe we are all just dreaming?
I was once in Texas, and it was very flat. But maybe I dreamed that?
what a very cool story...you worked in some great suspence...and i really like the happy ending...
Amy I loved every second of your story very much. You really did a wonderful job on that one and I can't wait for you to do another one. You friend in NC.
Odie
Being all alone on a strange train can be scary all by itself. Being all alone anywhere can be a bit strange, but on a train, with a ghost? Even I was getting a bit nervous for Daisy.
Loved the ending. So fitting.
What a wonderful story. I could picture all of these things happening as I read them. I am always thankful for happy endings. Smiles.
Love it x
Amy,that was a great story and it was packed with lots of things, just like a real dream.
That dream was a bit more exciting than the ones I usually have, though when I was young like you, Amy, I used to dream exciting ones and they were always in bright colour.
Maggie X
Nuts in May
I really enjoyed your story, Amy! The suspense was terrific - my heart is still beating hard! I'm glad that everything ended happily. Great writing! =)
Amy, I loved your story and especially loved that it ended happily! Of course, I especially like good stories about girls named Daisy!
I have 2 brothers that live in Texas, but not near any mountains. Will you write more about Daisy and her adventures?
I have scary dreams sometimes and I'm always happy when I wake up and know that it's a dream.
Hi Amy, I love your story! My little boy is 3 and likes trains very much. Last night he told me he dreamed about 'water babies', whatever they are. Sometimes he has scary dreams and climbs into my bed for cuddles which seem to always make him feel a bit better. I am going to read your story to him tomorrow because I'm sure he'll like it! Love from Eve x
Sweet Daisy. My hubby likes trains. I guess in order to overcome her fear she'd need to travel of the train and see that it wasn't full of ghosts. :o0!
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Phew!
I couldn't stop reading till I'd finished. You're good at suspense. Glad Daisy's mum was so understanding :)
Phew!
I couldn't stop reading till I'd finished. You're good at suspense. Glad Daisy's mum was so understanding :)
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